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CallMeAlina
2015-10-19 11:42

大家来找茬吧,看这段描述有问题吗?

从别的地方摘的关于我们,并组合了一下,英语高手来帮忙看看有没有语法问题吧,谢谢大家啦!

There are two methods to cooperation. We can sewing total same as your design, or we can start with an idea and put your brand on our product. We provide the entire vertical from sample creation to production with attractive pricing, and superb customer service.We will source high quality material, manufactured in to your finished product by highly skilled workers. We look to turn your order around as quickly as possible, whilst keeping the standard of quality high.
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郑南虎
2015-10-22 16:32
找不到,茬在哪里?
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clarkhu
2015-10-19 22:27
加油啊,亲,,英语要变成老外看的顺的,不容易呀 不过也别当一回事,老外不会介意你水平差的,心意到就好了 呵呵,,不如降价1美金,,直接搞定
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骁勇善战大将军
2015-10-19 17:31
Two methods to cooperate with us . Either we sew things according to your design, or we design it but put on your logo . You can get the entire package service from us , from sample creation to batch production ,I assure you the most attractive prices and superb customer service . All our materials are singled out carefully , with some skillful worker's hard working , they turn into the product you want . We won't let ou down . We look forward to processing your order as soon as possible, meanwhile make sure the quality is excellent . 每个句子都以We 开头,不好的,写成中文也没有人有兴趣看。。多从客户的角度出发。。。 一点愚见,水平有限,见谅。
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user_6448
2015-10-19 17:00
1/ 少用we 2/ two methods的介绍可以分点,1., 2....这样子满满的密密麻麻的一段文字,我都不想看 3/ 语法不好的,尽量用短句子跟最简单通用的词汇,通俗易懂
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ZoeNi
2015-10-19 14:33
乍一下,第一句就有问题,to 后面跟的是动词。 另外第一人称We太多了。。。。 总之你还是继续改改吧
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