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liujianwei
2018-11-15 09:16

用户思维再体验

这几天一直在听如何建一和好网站的课程。 再没学之前也写了一些关于ABOUT 的文案。但是再听了课之后,思维上更系统了。让我对用户思维的理解又进一步深入。再此附上之前的写的文案(中英双语版)。希望大家多多提提意见。

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Who we are

1989年,我还在大学学习,主修护理专业。在校期间,随着对专业知识的深入了解,我越来越认识到家庭护理的重要性。我深信,随着人类社会的不断发展,健康的重要性是不言而喻的,而对人们的健康而言,预防以及康复医疗将会 成为重中之重。

In 1989, I was still studying in college and majoring in nursing. At that time,    I became more aware of the importance of home care.  With a deep understanding of the nursing profession, I am convinced that, with the continuous development of human society, the importance of health is self-evident, and especially, the prevention and rehabilitation medical care will be the top priority for people's health.

所以,从那时起,我就决定,我要立足于这个康复护理行业,做一个属于自己的平台和事业,让每一个家庭都能空出来更多的时间,让每个家庭成员(包括宠物,也是家庭一员)都要得到合理的保护。让每个家庭都能享受到简单、快乐、幸福的生活。

Therefore, Since then, I have decided that I would like to base myself on this rehabilitation nursing profession and build my own platform as a career of myself. If so, every family can spare more time for each family member (including pets and families One) under protected properly conditions.    So that each family can enjoy a simple, easier and happy life.

毕业后,我立刻创建了属于自己的第一家小工厂(严格来讲,是小作坊),属于Carewe™ 的第一批护理垫诞生了。幸运的是,收到国内外市场的好评。20多年过去了,现在家庭、超市,医院都有我们生产的护理产品和医疗用品。已经应用到了人们生活的方方面面。

After graduation, I immediately created my very own first small factory (strictly speaking, a small workshop).  And the first care pads belonging to Carewe ™ were born. Fortunately, we received favorable comments from domestic and foreign markets. More than 20 years later. Now, the market structure of our products includes families, hospitals, large-scale supermarkets, etc., which have been applied to all aspects of people's lives.

WHAT WE DO:

25年来, 我们从一个小作坊,现在已经发展成为一个规范性的工贸一体企业。从护理产品研发、设计、生产、销售,都有专业的团队人员负责。每一款产品,都有严格的质量把控,从原材料采购(绒毛浆、无纺布、高分子等),到生产管理,再到产品出库,质量方面层层把控。所以,我们相信,消费者拿到的每一款产品都是安全的。

For over 20 years, we have grown from a small workshop to a normative industry and trade enterprise. From care product research and development, design, production to sales, all we have a professional team staff. Each product has strict quality control, from the procurement of raw materials (fluff pulp, non-woven fabrics, polymers, etc.), production management, and then to the product library, quality control at every level. So, we believe that every product is safe for our clients.

目前,工厂全体员工有100余人,最先进的产品生产线,规范化的GMP认证车间,研发团队20余人。我相信,一定能为您提供您想要的产品和护理方案。合我们合作,让您拥有丰厚利润的同时,一定能给你一个简单、快乐的幸福人生。

At present, all employees of the factory have more than 100 people, R & D team more than 20 persons.  The most advanced product line and standardized GMP certification workshop, so I believe we will be able to provide you with the product you want and the best care programs also. Together with us, you have a huge profit, and at the same time, a simple, happy, easier life is around you.

>>文化:健康护理是每一个人的终生课题。是一种生活方式

Health care is a life-long issue for everyone   Health care is a way of life

>>使命:Make your life easier。

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有点装,装情怀的感觉,也有点讲故事的感觉。 i_f30.gif 希望大家多多点评,多多提意见。。

再次感谢米课,感谢大家

 


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